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authorMurray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>2001-09-02 12:16:01 +0000
committerMurray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>2001-09-02 12:16:01 +0000
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Update descriptions of the CVSup collections. Reword an HTML-specific
sentence. PR: docs/29522 Submitted by: Gary W. Swearingen <swear@aa.net>
Notes
Notes: svn path=/head/; revision=10541
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml16
1 files changed, 9 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml
index 1d61f8593f..c447e38c9c 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
<!--
The FreeBSD Documentation Project
- $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml,v 1.149 2001/09/02 10:04:41 murray Exp $
+ $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml,v 1.150 2001/09/02 11:16:16 murray Exp $
-->
<appendix id="mirrors">
@@ -1907,8 +1907,9 @@
<para>The files available via <application>CVSup</application>
are organized into named groups called
<quote>collections</quote>. The collections that are
- available are described <link
- linkend="cvsup-collec">here</link>. In this example, we
+ available are described in the <link
+ linkend="cvsup-collec">following section</link>. In this
+ example, we
wish to receive the entire main source tree for the FreeBSD
system. There is a single large collection
<literal>src-all</literal> which will give us all of that.
@@ -2489,7 +2490,8 @@ doc/ja_JP.eucJP</screen>
<listitem>
<para>Sources for the FreeBSD Handbook and other
- documentation.</para>
+ documentation. This does not include files for
+ the FreeBSD web site.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -3162,7 +3164,7 @@ doc/ja_JP.eucJP</screen>
<term><literal>www release=cvs</literal></term>
<listitem>
- <para>The sources for the World Wide Web data.</para>
+ <para>The sources for the FreeBSD WWW site.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
@@ -3199,8 +3201,8 @@ doc/ja_JP.eucJP</screen>
<term><literal>www release=current</literal></term>
<listitem>
- <para>The installed World Wide Web data. Used by WWW mirror
- sites.</para>
+ <para>The pre-processed FreeBSD WWW site files (not the
+ source files). Used by WWW mirror sites.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>