Fix a variety of English style nits and other issues found with igor.

Reviewed by:	gabor
Approved by:	wblock

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml
index 55ee7f018d..d3b7cd3690 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="mac-inline-glossary">
-    <title>Key Terms in this Chapter</title>
+    <title>Key Terms in This Chapter</title>
 
     <para>Before reading this chapter, a few key terms must be
       explained.  This will hopefully clear up any confusion that
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
       <listitem>
 	<para><emphasis>subject</emphasis>: a subject is any
 	  active entity that causes information to flow between
-	  <emphasis>objects</emphasis>; e.g. a user, user processor,
+	  <emphasis>objects</emphasis>; e.g., a user, user process,
 	  system process, etc.  On &os;, this is almost always a thread
 	  acting in a process on behalf of a user.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -1065,7 +1065,7 @@ test: biba/high</screen>
       using a variety of <command>sysctl</command> variables.  In
       essence &man.mac.portacl.4; makes it possible to allow
       non-<username>root</username> users to bind to specified
-      privileged ports, i.e. ports fewer than 1024.</para>
+      privileged ports, i.e., ports below 1024.</para>
 
     <para>Once loaded, this module will enable the
       <acronym>MAC</acronym> policy on all sockets.  The following
@@ -1115,13 +1115,13 @@ test: biba/high</screen>
     <note>
       <para>Since the ruleset is interpreted directly by the kernel
 	only numeric values can be used for the user ID, group ID, and
-	port parameters.  I.e. user, group, and port service names
-	cannot be used.</para>
+	port parameters.  Names cannot be used for users, groups, or
+	services.</para>
     </note>
 
-    <para>By default, on &unix;-like systems, ports fewer than 1024
+    <para>By default, on &unix;-like systems, ports below 1024
       can only be used by/bound to privileged processes,
-      i.e. those run as <username>root</username>.  For
+      i.e., those run as <username>root</username>.  For
       &man.mac.portacl.4; to allow non-privileged processes to bind
       to ports below 1024 this standard &unix; restriction has to be
       disabled.  This can be accomplished by setting the &man.sysctl.8;
@@ -1880,7 +1880,8 @@ setpmac biba/10\(10-10\) /usr/local/etc/rc.d/nagios.sh forcestart</userinput></s
 
     <para>For this scenario, the &man.mac.bsdextended.4; mixed with
       &man.mac.seeotheruids.4; could co-exist and block access not
-      only to system objects but to hide user processes as well.
+      only to system objects, but to hide user processes as
+      well.</para>
 
     <para>Begin by adding the following line to
       <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para>
@@ -1983,7 +1984,7 @@ setpmac biba/10\(10-10\) /usr/local/etc/rc.d/nagios.sh forcestart</userinput></s
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>Cannot start a X11 server after <acronym>MAC</acronym></title>
+      <title>X11 Server Will Not Start After <acronym>MAC</acronym></title>
 
       <para>After establishing a secure environment with
 	<acronym>MAC</acronym>, I am no longer able to start