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| author | Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> | 2013-06-20 15:32:15 +0000 |
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| committer | Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> | 2013-06-20 15:32:15 +0000 |
| commit | 2fa13521d6fa75c2916d0093ce2416ee9e672128 (patch) | |
| tree | 0af2825fc5d3ab3d7720b469e2393b1542b47ff8 | |
| parent | b646a1a1e8f1f0315544e9025208ad564291b661 (diff) | |
| download | doc-2fa13521d6fa75c2916d0093ce2416ee9e672128.tar.gz doc-2fa13521d6fa75c2916d0093ce2416ee9e672128.zip | |
Include recent years in copyright notice, remove some uses of "you" in
introduction, add suggestion about corrections and additions. Remove the
part about sections that are not complete being marked with a star, there
are none.
Notes
Notes:
svn path=/head/; revision=41965
| -rw-r--r-- | en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml | 11 |
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml index 273cf4ab15..46a81c7758 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml @@ -70,15 +70,14 @@ <para>Thank you for becoming a part of the FreeBSD Documentation Project. Your contribution is extremely valuable.</para> - <para>This primer covers everything you will need to know in - order to start contributing to the FreeBSD Documentation - Project, from the tools and software you will be using (both + <para>This primer covers details needed + to start contributing to the FreeBSD Documentation + Project, from the tools and software (both mandatory and recommended) to the philosophy behind the Documentation Project.</para> - <para>This document is a work in progress, and is not complete. - Sections that are known to be incomplete are indicated with a - <literal>*</literal> in their name.</para> + <para>This document is a work in progress. Corrections and + additions are welcomed.</para> </abstract> </bookinfo> |