|author||Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>||2023-01-15 17:13:09 +0000|
|committer||Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>||2023-01-15 17:13:09 +0000|
handbook/bsdinstall: minor rewording of install guidance
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc
index bc1bb8da48..8792882f2e 100644
@@ -848,7 +848,7 @@ If a wireless network interface is chosen, the system will instead scan for wire
.Scanning for Wireless Access Points
image::bsdinstall-configure-wireless-scan.png[Menu showing wireless network scanning.]
-Wireless networks are identified by a Service Set Identifier (SSID), a short, unique name given to each network.
+Wireless networks are identified by a Service Set Identifier (SSID); a short, unique name given to each network.
SSIDs found during the scan are listed, followed by a description of the encryption types available for that network.
If the desired SSID does not appear in the list, select btn:[Rescan] to scan again.
If the desired network still does not appear, check for problems with antenna connections or try moving the computer closer to the access point.
@@ -887,7 +887,7 @@ If a DHCP server is available, select btn:[Yes] in the next menu to automaticall
The installer will appear to pause for a minute or so as it finds the DHCP server and obtains the addressing information for the system.
-.Choose IPv4DHCP Configuration
+.Choose IPv4 DHCP Configuration
image::bsdinstall-configure-network-interface-ipv4-dhcp.png[Menu indicating if DHCP wants to be configured for the selected interface.]
If a DHCP server is not available, select btn:[No] and input the following addressing information in this menu:
@@ -1004,11 +1004,11 @@ image::bsdinstall-config-services.png[Menu showing the different services availa
Here is a summary of the services that can be enabled in this menu:
-* `local_unbound` - Enable the DNS local unbound. It is necessary to keep in mind that this is the unbound of the base system and is only meant for use as a local caching forwarding resolver. If the objective is to set up a resolver for the entire network install package:dns/unbound.
+* `local_unbound` - Enable the DNS local unbound. It is necessary to keep in mind that this is a configuration only meant for use as a local caching forwarding resolver. If the objective is to set up a resolver for the entire network, install package:dns/unbound.
* `sshd` - The Secure Shell (SSH) daemon is used to remotely access a system over an encrypted connection. Only enable this service if the system should be available for remote logins.
* `moused` - Enable this service if the mouse will be used from the command-line system console.
-* `ntpdate` - Enable the automatic clock synchronization at boot time. The functionality of this program is now available in the man:ntpd daemon. After a suitable period of mourning, the man:ntpdate utility will be retired.
-* `ntpd` - The Network Time Protocol (NTP) daemon for automatic clock synchronization. Enable this service if there is a Windows(R), Kerberos, LDAP server on the network, or to use a remote server pool is desired.
+* `ntpdate` - Enable automatic clock synchronization at boot time. Note that the functionality of this program is now available in the man:ntpd daemon and the man:ntpdate utility will soon be retired.
+* `ntpd` - The Network Time Protocol (NTP) daemon for automatic clock synchronization. Enable this service if you wish to synchronise your system clock with a remote time server or pool.
* `powerd` - System power control utility for power control and energy saving.
* `dumpdev` - Crash dumps are useful when debugging issues with the system, so users are encouraged to enable them.