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authorCeri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>2021-01-12 17:57:32 +0000
committerDaniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org>2021-01-12 18:33:23 +0000
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books/: Address more instances of sentences beginning with 'Because...'
As was the case with the previous commit, the intention is to avoid sentence fragments as well as sentences that can be mistaken for them, since the handbook isn't written in a style that makes use of subordinate conjunctions. While touching the relevant files, I also fixed a few issues pointed out by PauAmma, and reflowed a sentence as a result. PR: 252519 Submitted by: ceri@ Reviewed by: PauAmma
Diffstat (limited to 'en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook')
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.xml2
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml4
2 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.xml
index 798b7bc6d9..2ba2795fb3 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.xml
@@ -1585,7 +1585,7 @@ init.3: lea 0x8(%di),%di # Next entry
if multitasking facilities are used or different privilege
levels are defined. Since the <filename>boot2</filename>
client is executed in privilege level 3, but the
- <acronym>BTX</acronym> server does in privilege level 0, a
+ <acronym>BTX</acronym> server runs in privilege level 0, a
<acronym>TSS</acronym> must be defined:</para>
<figure xml:id="btx-tss">
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml
index 7de627b5b9..dfde154052 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.xml
@@ -1634,9 +1634,9 @@
routine (or the other way around, the poll routine may be doing
the real action and the interrupt routine would just call the
poll routine). Why bother about a separate function then?
- Due to different calling conventions. The
+ This has to do with different calling conventions. The
<function>xxx_poll</function> routine gets the struct cam_sim
- pointer as its argument when the PCI interrupt routine by common
+ pointer as its argument while the PCI interrupt routine by common
convention gets pointer to the struct
<varname remap="structname">xxx_softc</varname> and the ISA interrupt routine
gets just the device unit number. So the poll routine would