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authorWarren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>2013-07-18 00:49:59 +0000
committerWarren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>2013-07-18 00:49:59 +0000
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A few more simplifications and corrections to the structure chapter.
Notes
Notes: svn path=/head/; revision=42311
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diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml
index b4974a9068..84e7998463 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
- <para>In addition, the documentation tree has to accommodate
+ <para>In addition, the documentation tree must accommodate
documents in many different languages and encodings. It is
important that the documentation tree structure does not enforce
any particular defaults or cultural preferences.</para>
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
<para>Not every <filename
class="directory"><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename>
- directory will contain all of these subdirectories. It depends
+ directory will have all of these subdirectories. It depends
on how much translation has been accomplished by that
translation team.</para>
</sect1>
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@
<subtitle><filename>books/handbook/</filename></subtitle>
<para>The Handbook is written in DocBook <acronym>XML</acronym>
- using the &os; DocBook extended DTD.</para>
+ using the &os; DocBook extended <acronym>DTD</acronym>.</para>
<para>The Handbook is organized as a DocBook
<sgmltag>book</sgmltag>. The book is divided into
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@
<para>Then it will be called
<filename>chapter.xml</filename> in the
<filename>kernelconfig</filename> directory. In general,
- the entire contents of the chapter will be held in this
+ the entire contents of the chapter are in this one
file.</para>
<para>When the <acronym>XHTML</acronym> version of the
@@ -281,9 +281,9 @@
to include images in each chapter. Images for each
Handbook chapter are stored within <filename
class="directory">share/images/books/handbook</filename>.
- Note that the localized version of these images should be
+ The localized version of these images should be
placed in the same directory as the <acronym>XML</acronym>
- sources for each chapter. Namespace collisions would be
+ sources for each chapter. Namespace collisions are
inevitable, and it is easier to work with several
directories with a few files in them than it is to work
with one directory that has many files in it.</para>