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authorDaniel Harris <dannyboy@FreeBSD.org>2000-07-07 18:38:38 +0000
committerDaniel Harris <dannyboy@FreeBSD.org>2000-07-07 18:38:38 +0000
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Fixed lots of typos, thinkos and grammar errors. I ran this by Nik a while
back, since he's the only one who's touched most of the fdp-primer. Reviewed by: nik
Notes
Notes: svn path=/head/; revision=7525
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diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml
index 6b42003e89..f564b25e4d 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS DOCUMENTATION, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
- $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml,v 1.2 1999/09/06 06:52:42 peter Exp $
+ $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml,v 1.3 2000/04/30 23:01:09 nik Exp $
-->
<chapter id="structure">
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
<para>The <filename>doc/</filename> tree is organised in a particular
fashion, and the documents that are part of the FDP are in turn organised
in a particular fashion. The aim is to make it simple to add new
- documentation in to the tree and;</para>
+ documentation in to the tree and:</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>be easy to automate converting the document to other formats</para>
+ <para>make it easy to automate converting the document to other formats</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
<filename><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable>/</filename> directories</title>
<para>These directories contain the documents themselves. The
- documentation is split in to up to three more categories at this
+ documentation is split into up to three more categories at this
level, indicated by the different directory names.</para>
<segmentedlist>
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
<seg><filename>articles</filename></seg>
<seg>Documentation marked up as a DocBook <sgmltag>article</sgmltag>
- (or equivalent). Reasonably short, and broken up in to sections.
+ (or equivalent). Reasonably short, and broken up into sections.
Normally only available as one HTML file.</seg>
</seglistitem>
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
<seg>Documentation marked up as a DocBook <sgmltag>book</sgmltag> (or
equivalent). Book length, and broken up in to chapters. Normally
available as both one large HTML file (for people with fast
- connections, or who want to print it easily from their browser) and
+ connections, or who want to print it easily from a browser) and
as a collection of linked, smaller files.</seg>
</seglistitem>
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
<para>Not every
<filename><replaceable>lang</replaceable>.<replaceable>encoding</replaceable></filename> directory will contain all of these directories. It depends
- on much translation has been accomplished by that translation
+ on how much translation has been accomplished by that translation
team.</para>
</sect1>
@@ -259,14 +259,14 @@
<para>Each <filename>chapter.sgml</filename> file will not be a
complete SGML document. In particular, they will not have their
- own DOCTYPE line at the start of the file.</para>
+ own DOCTYPE lines at the start of the files.</para>
<para>This is unfortunate as
it makes it impossible to treat these as generic SGML
files and simply convert them to HTML, RTF, PS, and other
formats in the same way the main Handbook is generated. This
<emphasis>would</emphasis> force you to rebuild the Handbook
- every time you want to see the effect a change as had on just
+ every time you want to see the effect a change has had on just
one chapter.</para>
</sect4>
</sect3>