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authorCeri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>2021-01-12 17:57:32 +0000
committerDaniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org>2021-01-12 18:33:23 +0000
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books/: Address more instances of sentences beginning with 'Because...'
As was the case with the previous commit, the intention is to avoid sentence fragments as well as sentences that can be mistaken for them, since the handbook isn't written in a style that makes use of subordinate conjunctions. While touching the relevant files, I also fixed a few issues pointed out by PauAmma, and reflowed a sentence as a result. PR: 252519 Submitted by: ceri@ Reviewed by: PauAmma
Diffstat (limited to 'en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer')
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/manpages/chapter.xml2
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/po-translations/chapter.xml8
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml6
3 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/manpages/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/manpages/chapter.xml
index b2a78f8dc1..c951cbd85e 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/manpages/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/manpages/chapter.xml
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ information.</programlisting>
</callout>
<callout arearefs="co-manpages-macro-example-ls-8">
- <para>A final optional argument is defined. Because no name
+ <para>A final optional argument is defined. Since no name
is specified for the argument, the default of
<literal>file ...</literal> is used.</para>
</callout>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/po-translations/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/po-translations/chapter.xml
index e89c3bde73..cc5681e7a5 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/po-translations/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/po-translations/chapter.xml
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ A pgpkeys</screen>
A Makefile</screen>
<para>Check the contents of the
- <filename>Makefile</filename>. Because this is a simple
+ <filename>Makefile</filename>. As this is a simple
article, in this case the <filename>Makefile</filename>
can be used unchanged. The <literal>$&os;...$</literal>
version string on the second line will be replaced by the
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/../../..
<procedure>
<step>
- <para>Build the translated document. Because the original
+ <para>Build the translated document. As the original
is a book, the generated document is
<filename>book.xml</filename>.</para>
@@ -892,8 +892,8 @@ property 'svn:keywords' set on 'ko_KR.po'</screen>
<step>
<para>Set the <acronym>MIME</acronym> types of the files.
- Because these files use the <acronym>UTF-8</acronym>
- character set, that is also specified. To prevent the
+ These files use the <acronym>UTF-8</acronym>
+ character set, so that is also specified. To prevent the
version control system from mistaking these files for
binary data, the <literal>fbsd:notbinary</literal>
property is also set:</para>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml
index 96d2c60d0a..a91251c25b 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
<para>A tag is used to identify where a particular element starts,
and where the element ends. <emphasis>The tag is not part of
- the element itself</emphasis>. Because each grammar was
+ the element itself</emphasis>. As each grammar was
normally written to mark up specific types of information, each
one will recognize different elements, and will therefore have
different names for the tags.</para>
@@ -596,9 +596,9 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity error : Element head content does not foll
council delegated this to the American National
Standards Institute (<acronym>ANSI</acronym>).</para>
- <para>Because the &os; Project has not been registered,
+ <para>Since the &os; Project has not been registered,
the owner string is <literal>-//&os;</literal>. As seen
- in the example, the <acronym>W3C</acronym> are not a
+ in the example, the <acronym>W3C</acronym> is not a
registered owner either.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>