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authorCeri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>2021-01-12 17:57:32 +0000
committerDaniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org>2021-01-12 18:33:23 +0000
commiteab1c5d1f64d77131928469081729d6370841075 (patch)
tree5aaa758399ebfc150b54f2f29b86091b589528fe /en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
parenta266a60bd208fcb4e47389c75906b1fc8c30a2cd (diff)
books/: Address more instances of sentences beginning with 'Because...'
As was the case with the previous commit, the intention is to avoid sentence fragments as well as sentences that can be mistaken for them, since the handbook isn't written in a style that makes use of subordinate conjunctions. While touching the relevant files, I also fixed a few issues pointed out by PauAmma, and reflowed a sentence as a result. PR: 252519 Submitted by: ceri@ Reviewed by: PauAmma
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1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
index bc31008871..1be3270b7e 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
@@ -2867,7 +2867,7 @@ Swap: 2048M Total, 2048M Free
- <para>Use &man.kill.1; to send the signal. Because
+ <para>Use &man.kill.1; to send the signal. As
&man.inetd.8; is owned by
<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>, use
&man.su.1; to become
@@ -3218,8 +3218,8 @@ Swap: 2048M Total, 2048M Free
- <para>Most &os; configuration is done by editing text files.
- Because of this, it is a good idea to become familiar with a
+ <para>Most &os; configuration is done by editing text files, so
+ it is a good idea to become familiar with a
text editor. &os; comes with a few as part of the base system,
and many more are available in the Ports Collection.</para>