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authorCeri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>2021-01-12 17:57:32 +0000
committerDaniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org>2021-01-12 18:33:23 +0000
commiteab1c5d1f64d77131928469081729d6370841075 (patch)
tree5aaa758399ebfc150b54f2f29b86091b589528fe /en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml
parenta266a60bd208fcb4e47389c75906b1fc8c30a2cd (diff)
books/: Address more instances of sentences beginning with 'Because...'
As was the case with the previous commit, the intention is to avoid sentence fragments as well as sentences that can be mistaken for them, since the handbook isn't written in a style that makes use of subordinate conjunctions. While touching the relevant files, I also fixed a few issues pointed out by PauAmma, and reflowed a sentence as a result. PR: 252519 Submitted by: ceri@ Reviewed by: PauAmma
Diffstat (limited to 'en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml')
1 files changed, 2 insertions, 2 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml
index 9913ad3755..db13e71ef6 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.xml
@@ -1031,7 +1031,7 @@ ttyu5 "/usr/libexec/getty std.19200" vt100 on insecure</programlisting>
device provides a 16-character buffer, which allows for better
system performance. Bugs in plain 16550 devices prevent the use
of the 16-character buffer, so use 16550A devices if possible.
- Because single-character-buffer devices require more work by the
+ As single-character-buffer devices require more work by the
operating system than the 16-character-buffer devices,
16550A-based serial interface cards are preferred. If the
system has many active serial ports or will have a heavy load,
@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ ttyu5 "/usr/libexec/getty std.19200" vt100 on insecure</programlisting>
<para>The second method is to configure the
<acronym>RS-232</acronym> interface to vary its speed based on
- the remote user's connection speed. Because
+ the remote user's connection speed. As
<command>getty</command> does not understand any particular
modem's connection speed reporting, it gives a
<prompt>login:</prompt> message at an initial speed and