Remove references to first-person pronouns ("I", "me", etc.): all they

do is serve to confuse the reader (who is this "I"?).

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/ppp-primer/book.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/ppp-primer/book.sgml
index 1d434d8483..096ecb7cdd 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/ppp-primer/book.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/ppp-primer/book.sgml
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 </author>
 </authorgroup>
 
-<pubdate>$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/ppp-primer/book.sgml,v 1.7 2001/04/05 01:44:24 dd Exp $</pubdate>
+<pubdate>$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/ppp-primer/book.sgml,v 1.8 2001/04/09 00:33:58 dd Exp $</pubdate>
 
 <abstract><para>This is a step-by-step guide for configuring FreeBSD systems to act as
 a dial-up router/gateway in a Local Area Environment.  All entries may
@@ -740,9 +740,10 @@ and <filename>/usr/share/examples/ppp</filename> directories.  Please take
 some time to review these files; they were derived from working
 systems and represent the features and capabilities of the PPP
 program.</para>
-  
-<para>I <emphasis>strongly</emphasis> encourage you to learn from these sample files and
-apply them to your own configuration as necessary.</para>
+
+<para>You are <emphasis>strongly</emphasis> encouraged to learn from
+these sample files and apply them to your own configuration as
+necessary.</para>
   
 <para>For detailed information about the `ppp` program, read the ppp
 manpage: