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| author | Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org> | 2004-12-18 15:23:18 +0000 |
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| committer | Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org> | 2004-12-18 15:23:18 +0000 |
| commit | 0c01c9f5049474e7b05b7622f6187ed468762fa8 (patch) | |
| tree | 0e14f6b7c0b97bcb9ce2108f4ecad27baab2dd49 /en_US.ISO8859-1/slides | |
| parent | 4a4bbecf0d13906f52f64e89b22dbdf607cd9a3c (diff) | |
| download | doc-0c01c9f5049474e7b05b7622f6187ed468762fa8.tar.gz doc-0c01c9f5049474e7b05b7622f6187ed468762fa8.zip | |
Some grammatical fixes from the PR below, and some more of my own.
PR: docs/74624
Submitted by: Gavin Atkinson <gavin dot atkinson at ury dot york dot ac dot uk>
Notes
Notes:
svn path=/head/; revision=23269
Diffstat (limited to 'en_US.ISO8859-1/slides')
| -rw-r--r-- | en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml | 18 |
1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml index dd584583c5..891e4501d5 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ <!-- $FreeBSD$ --> <foilgroup> - <foil><title>Who uses FreeBSD?</title> + <foil><title>Who Uses FreeBSD?</title> - <para>FreeBSD is used by many of the worlds largest corporations, + <para>FreeBSD is used by many of the world's largest corporations, and busiest Internet sites.</para> <itemizedlist> @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ <listitem>In the last year alone, about one million new FreeBSD hosts were counted by Netcraft, an incredible growth rate - despite more media attention for Linux.</listitem> + despite more media attention towards Linux.</listitem> </itemizedlist> </foil> @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ <listitem>Source availability for helping understand and fix problems that occur (having the source to the - system helps you understand why your application does not + system helps you to understand why your application does not do what you expect)</listitem> <listitem>Good performance</listitem> @@ -67,11 +67,11 @@ </foil> - <foil><title>FreeBSD used for Internet Infrastructure</title> + <foil><title>FreeBSD Used for Internet Infrastructure</title> <itemizedlist> - <listitem>BSD has existed since the last 1970's and was the testbed + <listitem>BSD has existed since the late 1970's and was the testbed and reference implementation for TCP/IP.</listitem> <listitem>The Internet Software Consortium (ISC) uses FreeBSD @@ -81,13 +81,13 @@ <listitem>Modern FreeBSD is extremely refined and mature.</listitem> - <listitem>FreeBSD consistently placed at the top of the "uptime" + <listitem>FreeBSD consistently places at the top of the "uptime" lists produced by Netcraft to measure the stability of the world's busiest websites.</listitem> </itemizedlist> </foil> - <foil><title>Embedded uses of FreeBSD</title> + <foil><title>Embedded Uses of FreeBSD</title> <itemizedlist> @@ -108,4 +108,4 @@ </itemizedlist> </foil> -</foilgroup>
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