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authorCeri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>2004-12-18 15:23:18 +0000
committerCeri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>2004-12-18 15:23:18 +0000
commit0c01c9f5049474e7b05b7622f6187ed468762fa8 (patch)
tree0e14f6b7c0b97bcb9ce2108f4ecad27baab2dd49 /en_US.ISO8859-1/slides
parent4a4bbecf0d13906f52f64e89b22dbdf607cd9a3c (diff)
Some grammatical fixes from the PR below, and some more of my own.
PR: docs/74624 Submitted by: Gavin Atkinson <gavin dot atkinson at ury dot york dot ac dot uk>
Notes: svn path=/head/; revision=23269
Diffstat (limited to 'en_US.ISO8859-1/slides')
1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml
index dd584583c5..891e4501d5 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
<!-- $FreeBSD$ -->
- <foil><title>Who uses FreeBSD?</title>
+ <foil><title>Who Uses FreeBSD?</title>
- <para>FreeBSD is used by many of the worlds largest corporations,
+ <para>FreeBSD is used by many of the world's largest corporations,
and busiest Internet sites.</para>
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
<listitem>In the last year alone, about one million new FreeBSD
hosts were counted by Netcraft, an incredible growth rate
- despite more media attention for Linux.</listitem>
+ despite more media attention towards Linux.</listitem>
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
<listitem>Source availability for helping understand and fix
problems that occur (having the source to the
- system helps you understand why your application does not
+ system helps you to understand why your application does not
do what you expect)</listitem>
<listitem>Good performance</listitem>
@@ -67,11 +67,11 @@
- <foil><title>FreeBSD used for Internet Infrastructure</title>
+ <foil><title>FreeBSD Used for Internet Infrastructure</title>
- <listitem>BSD has existed since the last 1970's and was the testbed
+ <listitem>BSD has existed since the late 1970's and was the testbed
and reference implementation for TCP/IP.</listitem>
<listitem>The Internet Software Consortium (ISC) uses FreeBSD
@@ -81,13 +81,13 @@
<listitem>Modern FreeBSD is extremely refined and
- <listitem>FreeBSD consistently placed at the top of the "uptime"
+ <listitem>FreeBSD consistently places at the top of the "uptime"
lists produced by Netcraft to measure the stability of the
world's busiest websites.</listitem>
- <foil><title>Embedded uses of FreeBSD</title>
+ <foil><title>Embedded Uses of FreeBSD</title>
@@ -108,4 +108,4 @@
-</foilgroup> \ No newline at end of file