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authorMurray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>2004-09-08 09:37:18 +0000
committerMurray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>2004-09-08 09:37:18 +0000
commitb4701c9b08b543d5b3f42fa1420aa8a0266751b7 (patch)
treee758ec14392d6927946246400e590f4089801516 /en_US.ISO8859-1/slides
parent5afcbfda825b36df4f8ccd66bc02b6db84631c50 (diff)
Clean up after the last commit. Improve grammar, add a missing word (1).
(1) submitted by: ceri
Notes: svn path=/head/; revision=22278
Diffstat (limited to 'en_US.ISO8859-1/slides')
1 files changed, 12 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml
index 85c90c2889..dd584583c5 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
<listitem>Combined, these systems process about 1.5 trillion
U.S. dollars per year and growing. They are using X11,
- Apache, jails, perl, and a lot of other free
+ Apache, jails, Perl, and a lot of other free
<listitem>Factors that help:
@@ -46,20 +46,23 @@
<listitem>Source availability for helping understand and fix
- problems that occur (sometimes having the source to the
+ problems that occur (having the source to the
system helps you understand why your application does not
- do what you expect..)</listitem>
+ do what you expect)</listitem>
<listitem>Good performance</listitem>
<listitem>Easy hardware upgrade paths</listitem>
- <listitem>PC hardware sometimes is less perfect, but at PC
- hardware prices, hot spares are practical.</listitem>
<listitem>The application is spread over many servers.
- Need more power in one part? Add more Freebsd boxes.</listitem>
+ Need more power in one part? Add more FreeBSD boxes.</listitem>
- </listitem>
+ <para>PC hardware sometimes is less than perfect, but at PC
+ hardware prices, hot spares are practical.</para>
+ </listitem>
@@ -100,7 +103,7 @@
US serving content to millions of cable and satellite
- <listitem>BSD License makes these commercial embedded
+ <listitem>The BSD license makes these commercial embedded
applications possible.</listitem>