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author | Gabor Kovesdan <gabor@FreeBSD.org> | 2007-12-26 20:40:58 +0000 |
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committer | Gabor Kovesdan <gabor@FreeBSD.org> | 2007-12-26 20:40:58 +0000 |
commit | d75bf2fbf9b032d24cd1861e68e4fde0ae5e376b (patch) | |
tree | 4ff675a9ed46fb6acdc4aea765d537b3b56bc61f /en_US.ISO8859-1/slides | |
parent | c2cf5114d3ebbd39ae60e9bf611116a24e577589 (diff) | |
download | doc-d75bf2fbf9b032d24cd1861e68e4fde0ae5e376b.tar.gz doc-d75bf2fbf9b032d24cd1861e68e4fde0ae5e376b.zip |
- Include the "More Information" section
- Remove "What's new in 5.3", we need a similar part for 7.0
- Change the orders to the foils to be more logical and remove the XXX comment
about this
- Remove some silly and inconsistent comments
- Break lines to be easier to read
Notes
Notes:
svn path=/head/; revision=31173
Diffstat (limited to 'en_US.ISO8859-1/slides')
-rw-r--r-- | en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/freebsd-general/slides.xml | 45 |
1 files changed, 20 insertions, 25 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/freebsd-general/slides.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/freebsd-general/slides.xml index 6cd56b9969..8fe95d1363 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/freebsd-general/slides.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/freebsd-general/slides.xml @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -<?xml version='1.0'?> +<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?> <!-- $FreeBSD$ --> @@ -15,7 +15,8 @@ "../common/freebsd-recent-releases.xml"> <!ENTITY slides.freebsd-organization SYSTEM "../common/freebsd-organization.xml"> -<!ENTITY slides.freebsd-5.3 SYSTEM "../common/freebsd-5.3.xml"> +<!ENTITY slides.freebsd-more-information SYSTEM + "../common/freebsd-more-information.xml"> ]> <?dbhtml graphics-dir="/usr/local/share/xsl/slides/graphics" css-stylesheet-dir="/usr/local/share/xsl/slides/browser"?> @@ -31,19 +32,27 @@ <!-- Speaker's name goes here. --> - <author><firstname>Murray</firstname><surname>Stokely</surname><email>murray@FreeBSD.org</email></author> - <pubdate>Thursday, 9 Sep 2004</pubdate> - <copyright><year>2004</year> <holder>FreeBSD Mall, Inc.</holder></copyright> + <author> + <firstname>Murray</firstname> + <surname>Stokely</surname> + <email>murray@FreeBSD.org</email> + </author> + <pubdate>Thursday, 3 Jan 2008</pubdate> + <copyright> + <year>2004-2008</year> + <holder>FreeBSD Mall, Inc.</holder> + </copyright> </slidesinfo> -<foil id="intro-outline"><title>Outline</title> +<foil id="intro-outline"> + <title>Outline</title> + <itemizedlist> <listitem>What is FreeBSD?</listitem> <listitem>Who uses FreeBSD?</listitem> <listitem>FreeBSD Development Model</listitem> <listitem>FreeBSD Release / Branch Terminology</listitem> <listitem>Recent FreeBSD Releases</listitem> - <listitem>FreeBSD 5.3</listitem> <!-- XXX To Add : Gallery of FreeBSD users, comparisons with Linux, --> <!-- much more. --> @@ -51,7 +60,7 @@ </itemizedlist> </foil> -<!-- Include the 'What is FreeBSD' slides. --> +<!-- Include the slides --> &slides.what-is-freebsd; @@ -59,26 +68,12 @@ &slides.freebsd-dev-model; -&slides.freebsd-release-process; - -<!-- Include the 'Recent Releases' slides. --> - -&slides.freebsd-recent-releases; - -<!-- XXX this should be right after dev model. --> - &slides.freebsd-organization; -<!-- Slides about 'FreeBSD 5.3' --> +&slides.freebsd-release-process; -&slides.freebsd-5.3; +&slides.freebsd-recent-releases; -<foil id="More information"><title>More Information</title> - <itemizedlist> - <listitem><ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org"></ulink></listitem> - <listitem><ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/handbook">FreeBSD Handbook</ulink></listitem> - <listitem><ulink url="http://www.FreeBSDMall.com">FreeBSD Mall, Inc.</ulink></listitem> - </itemizedlist> -</foil> +&slides.freebsd-more-information; </slides> |