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author | Jim Mock <jim@FreeBSD.org> | 2000-01-21 20:59:30 +0000 |
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committer | Jim Mock <jim@FreeBSD.org> | 2000-01-21 20:59:30 +0000 |
commit | bdcae55fbca35406d02b57f1d73fa9c77b723ac7 (patch) | |
tree | 328331badfad17835dd09fd813525a25d572306c /en_US.ISO_8859-1/books | |
parent | 7857addaf59e2e26943c68f9f399494fb9bb3195 (diff) | |
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Fix minor spelling, grammatical, and punctuation errors.
Submitted by: Greg Sutter <gsutter@cdrom.com>
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diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml index cb248ba7c0..a24ed9c4e7 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <!-- The FreeBSD Documentation Project - $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v 1.32 2000/01/21 19:26:19 jim Exp $ + $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v 1.33 2000/01/21 20:00:44 jim Exp $ --> <chapter id="install"> @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ <para>The following chapter will attempt to guide you through the install of FreeBSD on your system. It can be installed through a - variety of methods including anonymous FTP (assuming you have + variety of methods, including anonymous FTP (assuming you have network connectivity via modem or local network), CDROM, floppy disk, tape, an MS-DOS partition, or even NFS.</para> @@ -135,23 +135,24 @@ you can make floppies with the <filename>makeflp.bat</filename> command.</para> - <para>If the CD has El Torrito boot support and your system + <para>If the CD has El Torito boot support and your system supports booting directly from the CDROM drive (many older systems do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis>), simply insert the first FreeBSD of the set into the drive and reboot your system. You will be put into the install menu directly from the CD.</para> <para>If you are installing from an MS-DOS partition and have - the proper drivers to access your cd, run the install.bat - script provided on the CDROM. This will attempt to boot - the FreeBSD installation directly from DOS.</para> + the proper drivers to access your CD, run the + <filename>install.bat</filename> script provided on the CDROM. + This will attempt to boot the FreeBSD installation directly + from DOS.</para> <note> <para>You must do this from actual DOS (i.e., boot in DOS mode) and not from a DOS window under Windows.</para> </note> - <para>For the easiest interface of the all (from DOS), type + <para>For the easiest interface of all (from DOS), type <command>view</command>. This will bring up a DOS menu utility that leads you through all of the available options.</para> @@ -194,21 +195,20 @@ <programlisting> ftp:*:99:99::0:0:FTP:/cdrom:/nonexistent</programlisting> - <para>Anyone with network connectivity to your machine (and - permission to log into it) can now chose a media type of FTP and - type in <userinput>ftp://<replaceable>your - machine</replaceable></userinput> after picking - “Other” in the FTP sites menu during the - install.</para> + <para>Anyone with network connectivity to your machine can now + chose a media type of FTP and type in + <userinput>ftp://<replaceable>your machine</replaceable></userinput> + after picking “Other” in the FTP sites menu during + the install.</para> </sect3> <sect3> <title>Before installing from Floppies</title> <para>If you must install from floppy disk (which we suggest you - do not do), either due to unsupported hardware or simply because - you insist on doing things the hard way, you must first prepare - some floppies for the install.</para> + do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis> do), either due to unsupported + hardware or simply because you insist on doing things the hard + way, you must first prepare some floppies for the install.</para> <para>At a minimum, you will need as many 1.44MB or 1.2MB floppies as it takes to hold all the files in the |