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authorJim Mock <jim@FreeBSD.org>2000-01-21 20:59:30 +0000
committerJim Mock <jim@FreeBSD.org>2000-01-21 20:59:30 +0000
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Fix minor spelling, grammatical, and punctuation errors.
Submitted by: Greg Sutter <gsutter@cdrom.com>
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<!--
The FreeBSD Documentation Project
- $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v 1.32 2000/01/21 19:26:19 jim Exp $
+ $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v 1.33 2000/01/21 20:00:44 jim Exp $
-->
<chapter id="install">
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
<para>The following chapter will attempt to guide you through the
install of FreeBSD on your system. It can be installed through a
- variety of methods including anonymous FTP (assuming you have
+ variety of methods, including anonymous FTP (assuming you have
network connectivity via modem or local network), CDROM, floppy
disk, tape, an MS-DOS partition, or even NFS.</para>
@@ -135,23 +135,24 @@
you can make floppies with the <filename>makeflp.bat</filename>
command.</para>
- <para>If the CD has El Torrito boot support and your system
+ <para>If the CD has El Torito boot support and your system
supports booting directly from the CDROM drive (many older
systems do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis>), simply insert the first
FreeBSD of the set into the drive and reboot your system. You
will be put into the install menu directly from the CD.</para>
<para>If you are installing from an MS-DOS partition and have
- the proper drivers to access your cd, run the install.bat
- script provided on the CDROM. This will attempt to boot
- the FreeBSD installation directly from DOS.</para>
+ the proper drivers to access your CD, run the
+ <filename>install.bat</filename> script provided on the CDROM.
+ This will attempt to boot the FreeBSD installation directly
+ from DOS.</para>
<note>
<para>You must do this from actual DOS (i.e., boot in DOS
mode) and not from a DOS window under Windows.</para>
</note>
- <para>For the easiest interface of the all (from DOS), type
+ <para>For the easiest interface of all (from DOS), type
<command>view</command>. This will bring up a DOS menu utility
that leads you through all of the available options.</para>
@@ -194,21 +195,20 @@
<programlisting>
ftp:*:99:99::0:0:FTP:/cdrom:/nonexistent</programlisting>
- <para>Anyone with network connectivity to your machine (and
- permission to log into it) can now chose a media type of FTP and
- type in <userinput>ftp://<replaceable>your
- machine</replaceable></userinput> after picking
- &ldquo;Other&rdquo; in the FTP sites menu during the
- install.</para>
+ <para>Anyone with network connectivity to your machine can now
+ chose a media type of FTP and type in
+ <userinput>ftp://<replaceable>your machine</replaceable></userinput>
+ after picking &ldquo;Other&rdquo; in the FTP sites menu during
+ the install.</para>
</sect3>
<sect3>
<title>Before installing from Floppies</title>
<para>If you must install from floppy disk (which we suggest you
- do not do), either due to unsupported hardware or simply because
- you insist on doing things the hard way, you must first prepare
- some floppies for the install.</para>
+ do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis> do), either due to unsupported
+ hardware or simply because you insist on doing things the hard
+ way, you must first prepare some floppies for the install.</para>
<para>At a minimum, you will need as many 1.44MB or 1.2MB floppies
as it takes to hold all the files in the