From eab1c5d1f64d77131928469081729d6370841075 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ceri Davies Date: Tue, 12 Jan 2021 18:57:32 +0100 Subject: books/: Address more instances of sentences beginning with 'Because...' As was the case with the previous commit, the intention is to avoid sentence fragments as well as sentences that can be mistaken for them, since the handbook isn't written in a style that makes use of subordinate conjunctions. While touching the relevant files, I also fixed a few issues pointed out by PauAmma, and reflowed a sentence as a result. PR: 252519 Submitted by: ceri@ Reviewed by: PauAmma --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml') diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml index 53dc3c06b2..e1ae696ce9 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.xml @@ -839,7 +839,7 @@ kern.ipc.shmall=32768 an &xorg; extension which allows a program to bypass the &xorg; server and directly - alter the framebuffer. Because it relies on a low level + alter the framebuffer. As it relies on a low-level memory mapping, programs using it must be run as root. The DGA extension can be tested and -- cgit v1.2.3