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author | Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> | 2016-12-16 23:28:17 +0000 |
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committer | Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> | 2016-12-16 23:28:17 +0000 |
commit | b5edbdd7d230e602382a6074ee137bbcfa291e60 (patch) | |
tree | 74d91bb3294bfd8f08fe6b8fc96c759643f74a1a | |
parent | 6fe4ee92c92d26045d37f935c7b6cc3244886fe1 (diff) | |
download | doc-b5edbdd7d230e602382a6074ee137bbcfa291e60.tar.gz doc-b5edbdd7d230e602382a6074ee137bbcfa291e60.zip |
Cleanup from linimon's patch along with some improvenating of
Englishification.
PR: 213060
Submitted by: linimon
Notes
Notes:
svn path=/head/; revision=49744
-rw-r--r-- | en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml | 33 |
1 files changed, 11 insertions, 22 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml index 817f91d79b..f0ff4f7ca1 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml @@ -39,12 +39,12 @@ <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/archs.html"> Tier 2</a> architecture, and as such is not fully supported by the <a href="&base;">FreeBSD</a> project. Although fully functional, the port - is not as mature as the existing i386 or amd64 ports.</p> + is not as feature-complete as the i386 or amd64 ports.</p> <h3><a name="hw">Hardware List</a></h3> <p>A summary of supported systems follows. SMP is supported on all supported - systems that contain more than 1 processor. For full details please see + systems that contain more than 1 processor. For full details, please see the <a href="&base;/releases/&rel.current;R/hardware.html"> hardware notes</a> of the <a href="&base;/releases/"> @@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ <li>Sun Ultra 450</li> </ul> - <p>The following systems are partially supported by FreeBSD. In - particular the fibre channel controllers in SBus-based systems are not + <p>These systems are partially supported by FreeBSD. In particular, + the fibre channel controllers in SBus-based systems are not supported. However, it is possible to use these with a SCSI controller supported by the esp(4) driver (Sun ESP SCSI, Sun FAS Fast-SCSI and Sun FAS366 Fast-Wide SCSI controllers).</p> @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ <p>Starting with 7.2-RELEASE, sparc64 systems based on Sun UltraSPARC III and beyond are also supported by FreeBSD, which includes - the following known working systems:</p> + these known working systems:</p> <ul> <li>Sun Blade 1000</li> @@ -124,8 +124,8 @@ <li>Sun Netra 20/Netra T4</li> </ul> - <p>The following Sun UltraSPARC systems are not tested but - believed to be also supported by FreeBSD:</p> + <p>These Sun UltraSPARC systems are not tested but are + believed to also be supported by FreeBSD:</p> <ul> <li>Sun Fire V125</li> @@ -134,15 +134,15 @@ </ul> <p>Starting with 7.4-RELEASE and 8.1-RELEASE, sparc64 systems based on Fujitsu SPARC64 V - are also supported by FreeBSD, which includes the following + are also supported by FreeBSD, which includes these known working systems:</p> <ul> <li>Fujitsu PRIMEPOWER® 250</li> </ul> - <p>The following Fujitsu SPARC64 systems are not tested but believed to be - also supported by FreeBSD:</p> + <p>These Fujitsu SPARC64 systems have not been tested but are believed to + also be supported by FreeBSD:</p> <ul> <li>Fujitsu PRIMEPOWER 450</li> @@ -150,20 +150,9 @@ <li>Fujitsu PRIMEPOWER 850</li> </ul> - <p>If you have a system that is not listed here please try it, and let + <p>If you have a system that is not listed here, please try it and let <a href="mailto:freebsd-sparc@FreeBSD.org">us</a> know about it.</p> - <h3><a name="who">Credits</a></h3> - - <p>The following people have been working either in the spotlights or behind - the scenes to get the FreeBSD port off the ground:</p> - - <ul> - <li>&a.jake.email;</li> - <li>&a.tmm.email;</li> - <li>&a.obrien.email;</li> - </ul> - <h3><a name="list">FreeBSD/sparc64 mailing list</a></h3> <p>To subscribe to this list, send an email to <tt class=" |