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author | Daniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org> | 2021-01-08 13:04:42 +0000 |
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committer | Daniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org> | 2021-01-08 13:04:42 +0000 |
commit | e194334c7994de1d5aa91259075cc4e05d0b4a73 (patch) | |
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Arch handbook and articles: Reword sentences beginning with 'Because...'
These sentences can either be or be mistaken for being sentence
fragments. While it is perfectly reasonable to use subordinate
conjunctions conversationally, as long as both clauses are explicitly
used in the same sentence, the handbook or articles are not written
in this style.
PR: 252493
Submitted by: Ceri Davies (ceri AT submonkey.net)
Reviewed by: 0mp, pauamma (pauamma AT gundo.com)
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diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/article.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/article.xml index 2cf7e001eb..79b56d296c 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/article.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/vm-design/article.xml @@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ cannot be combined with the next A-B sequence.</para> <para>Why do we interleave our swap space instead of just tack swap - areas onto the end and do something fancier? Because it is a whole + areas onto the end and do something fancier? It is a whole lot easier to allocate linear swaths of an address space and have the result automatically be interleaved across multiple disks than it is to try to put that sophistication elsewhere.</para> |