Fixed lots of typos, thinkos and grammar errors. I ran this by Nik a while

back, since he's the only one who's touched most of the fdp-primer.

Reviewed by:	nik

1 files changed, 20 insertions, 20 deletions

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
index 0ac3f02504..ef88ad5fd1 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
      ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS DOCUMENTATION, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
      POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml,v 1.10 2000/01/16 22:05:58 asmodai Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml,v 1.11 2000/02/08 19:39:12 peter Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="sgml-markup">
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@
 
 	  <para>Use:</para>
 
-	  <programlisting><![ CDATA [<p>A small excerpt from the US Constitution;</p>
+	  <programlisting><![ CDATA [<p>A small excerpt from the US Constitution:</p>
 
 <blockquote>We the People of the United States, in Order to form
   a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@
 	  unordered, and definition.</para>
 
 	<para>Typically, each entry in an ordered list will be numbered, while
-	  each entry in an unordered list will be proceeded by a bullet point.
+	  each entry in an unordered list will be preceded by a bullet point.
 	  Definition lists are composed of two sections for each entry.  The
 	  first section is the term being defined, and the second section is
 	  the definition of the term.</para>
@@ -476,7 +476,7 @@
 
 	<para>Typically, <sgmltag>em</sgmltag> is rendered in italic and
 	  <sgmltag>strong</sgmltag> is rendered in bold.  This is not always
-	  the case however, and you should not rely on it.</para>
+	  the case, however, and you should not rely on it.</para>
 
 	<example>
 	  <title><sgmltag>em</sgmltag> and <sgmltag>strong</sgmltag></title>
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@
     <para>DocBook was designed by the <ulink
 	url="http://www.oreilly.com/davenport/">Davenport Group</ulink> to be
       a DTD for writing technical documentation.  As such, and unlike LinuxDoc
-      and HTML, DocBook is very heavily orientated towards markup that
+      and HTML, DocBook is very heavily oriented towards markup that
       describes <emphasis>what</emphasis> something is, rather than describing
       <emphasis>how</emphasis> it should be presented.</para>
 
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@
 
       <para>DocBook allows you to structure your documentation in several
 	ways.  In the FreeBSD Documentation Project we are using two primary
-	types of DocBook document, the book, and the article.</para>
+	types of DocBook document: the book and the article.</para>
 
       <para>A book is organised into <sgmltag>chapter</sgmltag>s.  This is a
 	mandatory requirement.  There may be <sgmltag>part</sgmltag>s between
@@ -747,9 +747,9 @@
       <para>Obviously, you should consider the nature of the documentation you 
 	are writing in order to decide whether it is best marked up as a book
 	or an article.  Articles are well suited to information that does not
-	need to be broken down in to several chapters, and that is, relatively 
+	need to be broken down into several chapters, and that is, relatively 
 	speaking, quite short, at up to 20-25 pages of content.  Books are
-	best suited to information that can be broken up in to several
+	best suited to information that can be broken up into several
 	chapters, possibly with appendices and similar content as well.</para>
 
       <para>The <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/tutorials/">FreeBSD
@@ -877,7 +877,7 @@
 </chapter>]]></programlisting>
 	</example>
 
-	<para>A chapter can not be empty, it must contain elements in addition
+	<para>A chapter cannot be empty; it must contain elements in addition
 	  to <sgmltag>title</sgmltag>.  If you need to include an empty
 	  chapter then just use an empty paragraph.</para>
 
@@ -957,7 +957,7 @@
 
 	<para>You can introduce another layer of organisation between
 	  <sgmltag>book</sgmltag> and <sgmltag>chapter</sgmltag> with one or
-	  more <sgmltag>part</sgmltag>s.  This can not be done in an
+	  more <sgmltag>part</sgmltag>s.  This cannot be done in an
 	  <sgmltag>article</sgmltag>.</para>
 
 	<programlisting><![ CDATA [<part>
@@ -990,7 +990,7 @@
       <sect3>
 	<title>Paragraphs</title>
 	
-	<para>DocBook supports three types of paragraphs;
+	<para>DocBook supports three types of paragraphs:
 	  <sgmltag>formalpara</sgmltag>, <sgmltag>para</sgmltag>, and
 	  <sgmltag>simpara</sgmltag>.</para>
 	
@@ -1134,12 +1134,12 @@
 	</para>
 	  
 	<para><sgmltag>itemizedlist</sgmltag> and
-	  <sgmltag>orderedlist</sgmltag> are similar to the counterparts in
+	  <sgmltag>orderedlist</sgmltag> are similar to their counterparts in
 	  HTML, <sgmltag>ul</sgmltag> and <sgmltag>ol</sgmltag>.  Each one
 	  consists of one or more <sgmltag>listitem</sgmltag> elements, and
 	  each <sgmltag>listitem</sgmltag> contains one or more block
 	  elements.  The <sgmltag>listitem</sgmltag> elements are analagous to
-	  HTMLs <sgmltag>li</sgmltag> tags.  However, unlike HTML they are
+	  HTML's <sgmltag>li</sgmltag> tags.  However, unlike HTML, they are
 	  required.</para>
 	
 	<para><sgmltag>procedure</sgmltag> is slightly different.  It consists
@@ -1542,21 +1542,21 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen>
 	
 	<para>You will frequently want to refer to both applications and
 	  commands when writing for the Handbook.  The distinction between
-	  them is simple; an application is the name for a suite (or possibly
+	  them is simple: an application is the name for a suite (or possibly
 	  just 1) of programs that fulfil a particular task.  A command is the
 	  name of a program that the user can run.</para>
 
 	<para>In addition, you will occasionally need to list one or more of
 	  the options that a command might take.</para>
 	
-	<para>Finally, you will often want to list a command with it's manual
+	<para>Finally, you will often want to list a command with its manual
 	  section number, in the &ldquo;command(number)&rdquo; format so
 	  common in Unix manuals.</para>
 	
 	<para>Mark up application names with
 	  <sgmltag>application</sgmltag>.</para>
 	
-	<para>When you want to list a command with it's manual section number
+	<para>When you want to list a command with its manual section number
 	  (which should be most of the time) the DocBook element is 
 	  <sgmltag>citerefentry</sgmltag>.  This will contain a further two
 	  elements, <sgmltag>refentrytitle</sgmltag> and
@@ -1572,12 +1572,12 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen>
 
 	<para>The file that contains these entities is in
 	  <filename>doc/share/sgml/man-refs.ent</filename>, and can be
-	  referred to using this FPI;</para>
+	  referred to using this FPI:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES DocBook Manual Page Entities//EN"</programlisting>
 
 	<para>Therefore, the introduction to your documentation will probably
-	  look like this;</para>
+	  look like this:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>&lt;!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook V3.1-Based Extension//EN" [
 
@@ -2108,7 +2108,7 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen>
 	<para>Both of these elements have a <literal>linkend</literal>
 	  attribute.  The value of this attribute should be the value that you
 	  have used in a <literal>id</literal> attribute (it does not matter
-	  if that value has not yet occured in your document, this will work
+	  if that value has not yet occurred in your document; this will work
 	  for forward links as well as backward links).</para>
 	
 	<para>If you use <sgmltag>xref</sgmltag> then you have no control over
@@ -2229,7 +2229,7 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen>
     <title>* LinuxDoc</title>
     
     <para>LinuxDoc is an adaptation of the QWERTZ DTD, first adopted by the
-      <ulink url="http://sunsite.unc.edu/LDP/">Linux Documentation
+      <ulink url="http://www.linuxdoc.org/">Linux Documentation
 	Project</ulink>, and subsequently adopted by the FreeBSD Documentation
       Project.</para>