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authorWarren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>2012-10-14 16:01:08 +0000
committerWarren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>2012-10-14 16:01:08 +0000
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Remove contractions, fix spelling errors and title capitalization.
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Notes: svn path=/head/; revision=39750
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diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
index 71cb3baecb..cd3cde051a 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
@@ -643,7 +643,7 @@ before running "/usr/sbin/freebsd-update install"</screen>
</author>
</authorgroup>
</sect1info>
- <title>Portsnap: A Ports Collection Update Tool</title>
+ <title>Portsnap: a Ports Collection Update Tool</title>
<indexterm><primary>Updating and Upgrading</primary></indexterm>
<indexterm>
@@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.</screen>
</warning>
<warning>
- <title>Do not use <command>make world</command></title>
+ <title>Do Not Use <command>make world</command></title>
<para>A lot of older documentation recommends using
<command>make world</command> for this. Doing that skips
@@ -1932,16 +1932,16 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.</screen>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
- <para>Note that if you're upgrading from one release of the same &os;
+ <para>Note that if you are upgrading from one release of the same &os;
branch to a more recent release of the same branch, i.e., from 7.0 to
7.1, then this procedure may not be absolutely necessary, since
- you're unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler,
+ you are unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler,
kernel, userland and configuration files. The older approach
of <command>make <maketarget>world</maketarget></command> followed
by building and installing a new kernel might work well enough for
minor updates.</para>
- <para>But, when upgrading across major releases, people who don't
+ <para>But, when upgrading across major releases, people who do not
follow this procedure should expect some problems.</para>
<para>It is also worth noting that many upgrades
@@ -2965,7 +2965,7 @@ Building everything..
</author>
</authorgroup>
</sect1info>
- <title>Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries</title>
+ <title>Deleting Obsolete Files, Directories and Libraries</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries</primary>
</indexterm>
@@ -3049,7 +3049,7 @@ Building everything..
role="package">ports-mgmt/portmaster</filename> and <filename
role="package">ports-mgmt/portupgrade</filename> utilities can be used to
automate this process. After you've made sure that all ports are rebuilt
- and do not use the old libraries anymore, you can delete them using the
+ and do not use the old libraries any more, you can delete them using the
following command:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make delete-old-libs</userinput></screen>