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author | Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> | 2012-10-14 16:01:08 +0000 |
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committer | Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> | 2012-10-14 16:01:08 +0000 |
commit | 2d7b96b22f3b89ad0badb29897775cba00348107 (patch) | |
tree | ad27b1d6eb5fc3f11694ffb9979131964a4c18e8 /en_US.ISO8859-1/books | |
parent | 8ea28369d52dfaa6564b1f6e7a4e9c6da7d28dd0 (diff) | |
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Remove contractions, fix spelling errors and title capitalization.
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diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml index 71cb3baecb..cd3cde051a 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml @@ -643,7 +643,7 @@ before running "/usr/sbin/freebsd-update install"</screen> </author> </authorgroup> </sect1info> - <title>Portsnap: A Ports Collection Update Tool</title> + <title>Portsnap: a Ports Collection Update Tool</title> <indexterm><primary>Updating and Upgrading</primary></indexterm> <indexterm> @@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.</screen> </warning> <warning> - <title>Do not use <command>make world</command></title> + <title>Do Not Use <command>make world</command></title> <para>A lot of older documentation recommends using <command>make world</command> for this. Doing that skips @@ -1932,16 +1932,16 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.</screen> </listitem> </orderedlist> - <para>Note that if you're upgrading from one release of the same &os; + <para>Note that if you are upgrading from one release of the same &os; branch to a more recent release of the same branch, i.e., from 7.0 to 7.1, then this procedure may not be absolutely necessary, since - you're unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler, + you are unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler, kernel, userland and configuration files. The older approach of <command>make <maketarget>world</maketarget></command> followed by building and installing a new kernel might work well enough for minor updates.</para> - <para>But, when upgrading across major releases, people who don't + <para>But, when upgrading across major releases, people who do not follow this procedure should expect some problems.</para> <para>It is also worth noting that many upgrades @@ -2965,7 +2965,7 @@ Building everything.. </author> </authorgroup> </sect1info> - <title>Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries</title> + <title>Deleting Obsolete Files, Directories and Libraries</title> <indexterm> <primary>Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries</primary> </indexterm> @@ -3049,7 +3049,7 @@ Building everything.. role="package">ports-mgmt/portmaster</filename> and <filename role="package">ports-mgmt/portupgrade</filename> utilities can be used to automate this process. After you've made sure that all ports are rebuilt - and do not use the old libraries anymore, you can delete them using the + and do not use the old libraries any more, you can delete them using the following command:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make delete-old-libs</userinput></screen> |