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authorWarren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>2013-07-22 23:56:53 +0000
committerWarren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>2013-07-22 23:56:53 +0000
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Fix a spelling error and simplify the acronym definition paragraph.
Submitted by: bjk
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Notes: svn path=/head/; revision=42389
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diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
index 7a6d863fe3..66ee7242c6 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
@@ -282,15 +282,13 @@
<sect2>
<title>Acronyms</title>
- <para>Acronyms should be spelled out the first time
+ <para>Acronyms should be defined the first time
they appear in a document, as in: <quote>Network Time Protocol
(<acronym>NTP</acronym>)</quote>.
After the acronym has been defined, use
the acronym alone unless it makes more
- sense contextually to use the whole term. Usually, acronyms
- are defined only one per document. But they can also be
- defined the first time they appear in a
- chapter.</para>
+ sense contextually to use the whole term. Acronyms are usually
+ defined only once per chapter or per document.</para>
<para>All acronyms should be enclosed in
<sgmltag>acronym</sgmltag> tags.</para>