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@@ -55,13 +55,13 @@ endif::[]
FreeBSD supports the Point-to-Point (PPP) protocol which can be used to establish a network or Internet connection using a dial-up modem.
This chapter describes how to configure modem-based communication services in FreeBSD.
-After reading this chapter, you will know:
+Read this chapter to learn:
* How to configure, use, and troubleshoot a PPP connection.
* How to set up PPP over Ethernet (PPPoE).
* How to set up PPP over ATM (PPPoA).
-Before reading this chapter, you should:
+Before reading this chapter:
* Be familiar with basic network terminology.
* Understand the basics and purpose of a dial-up connection and PPP.
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ This line specifies the PAP/CHAP user name.Insert the correct value for _MyUserN
Line 14:::
This line specifies the PAP/CHAP password.
Insert the correct value for _MyPassword_.
-You may want to add an additional line, such as:
+An additional line may be added, such as:
+
[.programlisting]
....
@@ -384,8 +384,8 @@ router_enable="NO"
It is important that the `routed` daemon is not started, as `routed` tends to delete the default routing table entries created by `ppp`.
-It is probably a good idea to ensure that the `sendmail_flags` line does not include the `-q` option, otherwise `sendmail` will attempt to do a network lookup every now and then, possibly causing your machine to dial out.
-You may try:
+It is probably a good idea to ensure that the `sendmail_flags` line does not include the `-q` option, otherwise `sendmail` will attempt to do a network lookup every now and then, possibly causing the machine to dial out.
+Try this:
[.programlisting]
....
@@ -709,13 +709,13 @@ Here is an example of a working [.filename]#ppp.conf#:
[.programlisting]
....
default:
- set log Phase tun command # you can add more detailed logging if you wish
+ set log Phase tun command # add more detailed logging when needed
set ifaddr 10.0.0.1/0 10.0.0.2/0
name_of_service_provider:
- set device PPPoE:xl1 # replace xl1 with your Ethernet device
- set authname YOURLOGINNAME
- set authkey YOURPASSWORD
+ set device PPPoE:xl1 # replace xl1 with the Ethernet device
+ set authname THELOGINNAME
+ set authkey THEPASSWORD
set dial
set login
add default HISADDR
@@ -734,7 +734,7 @@ Add the following to [.filename]#/etc/rc.conf#:
....
ppp_enable="YES"
ppp_mode="ddial"
-ppp_nat="YES" # if you want to enable nat for your local network, otherwise NO
+ppp_nat="YES" # when needing to enable nat for the local network, otherwise NO
ppp_profile="name_of_service_provider"
....
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ Service tags are used to distinguish between different PPPoE servers attached to
Any required service tag information should be in the documentation provided by the ISP.
As a last resort, one could try installing the package:net/rr-pppoe[] package or port.
-Bear in mind however, this may de-program your modem and render it useless, so think twice before doing it.
+Bear in mind however, this may de-program the modem and render it useless, so think twice before doing it.
Simply install the program shipped with the modem.
Then, access the menu:System[] menu from the program.
The name of the profile should be listed there.
@@ -838,8 +838,8 @@ adsl:
open
....
-<.> The username used to authenticate with your ISP.
-<.> The password used to authenticate with your ISP.
+<.> The username used to authenticate with the ISP.
+<.> The password used to authenticate with the ISP.
Information about the link, or links, to establish is found in [.filename]#mpd.links#.
An example [.filename]#mpd.links# to accompany the above example is given beneath:
@@ -896,7 +896,7 @@ adsl:
....
<.> The username for the DSL provider.
-<.> The password for your account.
+<.> The password for the account.
[WARNING]
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