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authorKristof Provost <kp@FreeBSD.org>2018-07-01 15:17:53 +0000
committerKristof Provost <kp@FreeBSD.org>2018-07-01 15:17:53 +0000
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carp: Minor language improvements in the man page
Submitted by: Massimiliano Stucchi <max AT stucchi.ch>
Notes
Notes: svn path=/head/; revision=335841
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diff --git a/share/man/man4/carp.4 b/share/man/man4/carp.4
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@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ An arbitrary number of virtual host IDs can be configured on an interface.
An arbitrary number of IPv4 or IPv6 addresses can be attached to a particular
vhid.
It is important that all hosts participating in a vhid have the same list
-of prefixes configured on the vhid, since all prefixes are included in the
+of prefixes configured on the vhid, since all the prefixes are included in the
cryptographic checksum supplied in each advertisement.
Multiple vhids running on one interface participate in master/backup
elections independently.
@@ -123,10 +123,10 @@ Values above 1 enable logging of bad
packets.
The default value is 1.
.It Va net.inet.carp.demotion
-This value shows current level of CARP demotion.
+This value shows the current level of CARP demotion.
The value is added to the actual advskew sent in announcements for
all vhids.
-At normal system operation the demotion factor is zero.
+During normal system operation the demotion factor is zero.
However, problematic conditions raise its level: when
.Nm
experiences problem with sending announcements, when an interface
@@ -300,11 +300,11 @@ To see
.Nm
packets decoded in
.Xr tcpdump 1
-output, one needs to specify
+output, one needs to specify the
.Fl T Ar carp
option, otherwise
.Xr tcpdump 1
-tries to interpret them as VRRP packets:
+will interpret them as VRRP packets:
.Bd -literal -offset indent
tcpdump -npi vlan0 -T carp
.Ed