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-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml18
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml12
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml6
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml2
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml3
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml15
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml20
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml2
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml6
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml28
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml18
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml2
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml20
-rw-r--r--en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml4
14 files changed, 78 insertions, 78 deletions
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml
index e6365cd9df..cbcb32ec15 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml
@@ -646,10 +646,10 @@
</step>
<step>
- <title>Write The Image File to the Memory Stick</title>
+ <title>Write the Image File to the Memory Stick</title>
<procedure>
- <title>Using FreeBSD To Write the Image</title>
+ <title>Using FreeBSD to Write the Image</title>
<warning>
<para>The example below
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@
</procedure>
<procedure>
- <title>Using &windows; To Write the Image</title>
+ <title>Using &windows; to Write the Image</title>
<warning>
<para>Make sure you use the correct drive letter as the output
@@ -699,7 +699,7 @@
</step>
<step>
- <title>Writing The Image with Image Writer</title>
+ <title>Writing the Image with Image Writer</title>
<para>Double-click
the <application>Win32DiskImager</application> icon to start
@@ -1596,7 +1596,7 @@ Mounting root from ufs:/dev/md0c
<application>FDisk</application>.</para>
<figure id="sysinstall-fdisk1">
- <title>Typical Fdisk Partitions before Editing</title>
+ <title>Typical <command>fdisk</command> Partitions Before Editing</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@@ -2472,7 +2472,7 @@ installation menus to retry whichever operations have failed.
as the gateway for a Local Area Network.</para>
<figure id="ed-config2">
- <title>Set Network Configuration for ed0</title>
+ <title>Set Network Configuration for <replaceable>ed0</replaceable></title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@@ -3402,7 +3402,7 @@ Press [Enter] now to invoke an editor on /etc/exports
<term>Member groups</term>
<listitem>
- <para>The groups this user belongs to (i.e. gets access
+ <para>The groups this user belongs to (i.e., gets access
rights for).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -3420,7 +3420,7 @@ Press [Enter] now to invoke an editor on /etc/exports
<term>Login shell</term>
<listitem>
<para>The user's login shell (leave blank for
- default, e.g. <filename>/bin/sh</filename>).</para>
+ default, e.g., <filename>/bin/sh</filename>).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
@@ -4572,7 +4572,7 @@ Please press any key to reboot.</screen>
process by booting from a CD-ROM drive but it does not
contain the support for installing &os; from the CD
itself. You would need to perform a network based install
- (e.g. from an FTP server) after booting from this CD.</entry>
+ (e.g., from an FTP server) after booting from this CD.</entry>
</row>
<row>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml
index bfa0ef32e7..8f28a49105 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml
@@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ jail_<replaceable>www</replaceable>_devfs_ruleset="<replaceable>www_ruleset</rep
</itemizedlist>
<sect2 id="jails-tuning-utilities">
- <title>System tools for jail tuning in &os;</title>
+ <title>System Tools for Jail Tuning in &os;</title>
<para>Fine tuning of a jail's configuration is mostly done by
setting &man.sysctl.8; variables. A special subtree of sysctl
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ jail_<replaceable>www</replaceable>_devfs_ruleset="<replaceable>www_ruleset</rep
</sect2>
<sect2 id="jails-tuning-admintools">
- <title>High-level administrative tools in &os; Ports
+ <title>High-Level Administrative Tools in &os; Ports
Collection</title>
<para>Among the many third-party utilities for jail administration,
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ jail_<replaceable>www</replaceable>_devfs_ruleset="<replaceable>www_ruleset</rep
<para>This idea has been presented to resolve such issues by
sharing as much as is possible between jails, in a safe way
&mdash; using read-only &man.mount.nullfs.8; mounts, so that
- updating will be be simpler, and putting single services into
+ updating will be simpler, and putting single services into
individual jails will become more attractive. Additionally,
it provides a simple way to add or remove jails as well as a
way to upgrade them.</para>
@@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ jail_<replaceable>www</replaceable>_devfs_ruleset="<replaceable>www_ruleset</rep
<listitem>
<para>Each jailspace (read-write portion of each jail) shall
be created in <filename
- class="directory">/home/js</filename>.<para>
+ class="directory">/home/js</filename>.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -645,7 +645,7 @@ jail_<replaceable>www</replaceable>_devfs_ruleset="<replaceable>www_ruleset</rep
<para>This section will describe the steps needed to create the
master template that will be the read-only portion for the
- jails to use.<para>
+ jails to use.</para>
<para>It is always a good idea to update the &os; system to the
latest -RELEASE branch. Check the corresponding Handbook
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ jail_<replaceable>www</replaceable>_devfs_ruleset="<replaceable>www_ruleset</rep
setup and configure the jails in
<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>. This example demonstrates
the creation of 3 jails: <quote>NS</quote>,
- <quote>MAIL</quote> and <quote>WWW</quote>.<para>
+ <quote>MAIL</quote> and <quote>WWW</quote>.</para>
<procedure>
<step>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml
index 197a42d760..be0b450363 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml
@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ cpu I686_CPU</programlisting>
<para>This is the identification of the kernel. You should change
this to whatever you named your kernel,
- i.e. <literal><replaceable>MYKERNEL</replaceable></literal> if you have
+ i.e., <literal><replaceable>MYKERNEL</replaceable></literal> if you have
followed the instructions of the previous examples. The value you put
in the <literal>ident</literal> string will print when you boot up the
kernel, so it is useful to give the new kernel a different name if you
@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@ cpu I686_CPU</programlisting>
<para>The normal build process of &os; includes
debugging information when building the kernel with the
- the <option>-g</option> option, which enables debugging
+ <option>-g</option> option, which enables debugging
information when passed to &man.gcc.1;.</para>
<programlisting>options SCHED_ULE # ULE scheduler</programlisting>
@@ -1242,7 +1242,7 @@ device wi # WaveLAN/Intersil/Symbol 802.11 wireless NICs.
device loop # Network loopback</programlisting>
<para>This is the generic loopback device for TCP/IP. If you telnet
- or FTP to <hostid>localhost</hostid> (a.k.a. <hostid
+ or FTP to <hostid>localhost</hostid> (aka <hostid
role="ipaddr">127.0.0.1</hostid>) it will come back at you through
this device. This is <emphasis>mandatory</emphasis>.</para>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml
index 6ac3dd92c0..47e9070f35 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Wide or multibyte encodings, e.g. EUC, Big5.</para>
+ <para>Wide or multibyte encodings, e.g., EUC, Big5.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml
index 1abb326aa5..256d308b09 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml
@@ -155,8 +155,7 @@ Id Refs Address Size Name
<para>This is by far the easiest method to use when installing the
runtime libraries. It is just like installing any other port
- from the <ulink type="html" url="file://localhost/usr/ports/">Ports Collection</ulink>.
- Simply do the following:</para>
+ from the <ulink type="html" url="file://localhost/usr/ports/">Ports Collection</ulink>:
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/emulators/linux_base-f10</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>make install distclean</userinput></screen>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml
index 55ee7f018d..c96ff6ad72 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@
</sect1>
<sect1 id="mac-inline-glossary">
- <title>Key Terms in this Chapter</title>
+ <title>Key Terms in This Chapter</title>
<para>Before reading this chapter, a few key terms must be
explained. This will hopefully clear up any confusion that
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
<listitem>
<para><emphasis>subject</emphasis>: a subject is any
active entity that causes information to flow between
- <emphasis>objects</emphasis>; e.g. a user, user processor,
+ <emphasis>objects</emphasis>; e.g., a user, user processor,
system process, etc. On &os;, this is almost always a thread
acting in a process on behalf of a user.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1065,7 +1065,7 @@ test: biba/high</screen>
using a variety of <command>sysctl</command> variables. In
essence &man.mac.portacl.4; makes it possible to allow
non-<username>root</username> users to bind to specified
- privileged ports, i.e. ports fewer than 1024.</para>
+ privileged ports, i.e., ports fewer than 1024.</para>
<para>Once loaded, this module will enable the
<acronym>MAC</acronym> policy on all sockets. The following
@@ -1115,13 +1115,13 @@ test: biba/high</screen>
<note>
<para>Since the ruleset is interpreted directly by the kernel
only numeric values can be used for the user ID, group ID, and
- port parameters. I.e. user, group, and port service names
+ port parameters. User, group, and port service names
cannot be used.</para>
</note>
<para>By default, on &unix;-like systems, ports fewer than 1024
can only be used by/bound to privileged processes,
- i.e. those run as <username>root</username>. For
+ i.e., those run as <username>root</username>. For
&man.mac.portacl.4; to allow non-privileged processes to bind
to ports below 1024 this standard &unix; restriction has to be
disabled. This can be accomplished by setting the &man.sysctl.8;
@@ -1880,7 +1880,8 @@ setpmac biba/10\(10-10\) /usr/local/etc/rc.d/nagios.sh forcestart</userinput></s
<para>For this scenario, the &man.mac.bsdextended.4; mixed with
&man.mac.seeotheruids.4; could co-exist and block access not
- only to system objects but to hide user processes as well.
+ only to system objects, but to hide user processes as
+ well.</para>
<para>Begin by adding the following line to
<filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para>
@@ -1983,7 +1984,7 @@ setpmac biba/10\(10-10\) /usr/local/etc/rc.d/nagios.sh forcestart</userinput></s
</sect2>
<sect2>
- <title>Cannot start a X11 server after <acronym>MAC</acronym></title>
+ <title>Cannot Start a X11 Server After <acronym>MAC</acronym></title>
<para>After establishing a secure environment with
<acronym>MAC</acronym>, I am no longer able to start
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml
index 7a82660745..5b455f1426 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ FreeBSD.org mail is handled (pri=10) by mx1.FreeBSD.org</screen>
</sect3>
<sect3 id="local">
- <title>Accessing local mailboxes</title>
+ <title>Accessing Local Mailboxes</title>
<para>Mailboxes may be accessed locally by directly utilizing
<acronym>MUA</acronym>s on the server on which the mailbox
@@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ procmail: "|/usr/local/bin/procmail"</programlisting>
<para>The file format is simple; the mailbox name on the left
side of the colon is expanded to the target(s) on the right.
The
- first example simply expands the mailbox <username>root</username>
+ first example expands the mailbox <username>root</username>
to the mailbox <username>localuser</username>, which is then
looked up again in the aliases database. If no match is found,
then the message is delivered to the local user
@@ -673,7 +673,7 @@ postmaster@example.com postmaster@noc.example.net
<para>However, for a variety of reasons, some system
administrators want to change their system's MTA. These
- reasons range from simply wanting to try out another MTA to
+ reasons range from merely wanting to try out another MTA to
needing a specific feature or package which relies on another
mailer. Fortunately, whatever the reason, FreeBSD makes it
easy to make the change.</para>
@@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ purgestat /usr/local/supermailer/bin/purgestat-compat</programlisting>
<para>Once you have everything configured the way you want it, you should
either kill the <application>sendmail</application> processes that
you no longer need and start the processes belonging to your new
- software, or simply reboot. Rebooting will also
+ software, or merely reboot. Rebooting will also
give you the opportunity to ensure that you have correctly
configured your system to start your new MTA automatically on boot.</para>
@@ -952,7 +952,7 @@ to /etc/mail/sendmail.cf.</programlisting>
deliver the mail it will try to connect to you (<hostid role="domainname">example.com</hostid>) over the modem
link. It will most likely time out because you are not online.
The program <application>sendmail</application> will automatically deliver it to the
- secondary MX site, i.e. your Internet provider (<hostid role="domainname">example.net</hostid>). The secondary MX
+ secondary MX site, i.e., your Internet provider (<hostid role="domainname">example.net</hostid>). The secondary MX
site will then periodically try to connect to
your host and deliver the mail to the primary MX host (<hostid role="domainname">example.com</hostid>).</para>
@@ -1037,8 +1037,8 @@ the DNS for <quote>customer.com</quote>.</programlisting>
locally, or would like to use a point and click
client/system on another machine or even another ISP. It
is also very useful if you only have one or two email
- accounts set up. If there is a large number of addresses
- to add, you can simply open this file in your favorite
+ accounts set up. If there are a large number of addresses
+ to add, open this file in your favorite
text editor and then add the domains, one per line:</para>
<programlisting>your.isp.example.com
@@ -1355,7 +1355,7 @@ if-bus.UUCP uucp-dom:if-bus
<para>Final hint: if you are uncertain whether some particular
mail routing would work, remember the <option>-bt</option>
option to <application>sendmail</application>. It starts <application>sendmail</application> in <emphasis>address test
- mode</emphasis>; simply enter <literal>3,0</literal>, followed
+ mode</emphasis>; enter <literal>3,0</literal>, followed
by the address you wish to test for the mail routing. The last
line tells you the used internal mail agent, the destination
host this agent will be called with, and the (possibly
@@ -1727,7 +1727,7 @@ define(`confAUTH_MECHANISMS', `GSSAPI DIGEST-MD5 CRAM-MD5 LOGIN')dnl</programlis
will be discussed later in this chapter (<xref
linkend="mail-fetchmail">).</para>
- <para>In order to send and receive email, simply invoke the
+ <para>In order to send and receive email, invoke the
<command>mail</command> command as per the following
example:</para>
@@ -1884,7 +1884,7 @@ EOT</screen>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>In order to read an email, simply select it using the cursor
+ <para>In order to read an email, select it using the cursor
keys, and press the <keycap>Enter</keycap> key. An example of
<application>mutt</application> displaying email can be seen
below:</para>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml
index a10901b6e5..9a0f08e977 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ SSH2 HostKey: 1024 e8:3b:29:7b:ca:9f:ac:e9:45:cb:c8:17:ae:9b:eb:55 /etc/ssh/ssh_
</example>
<example>
- <title>Using SSH to check out the <filename>src/</filename>
+ <title>Using SSH to Check out the <filename>src/</filename>
tree:</title>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cvs -d anoncvs@anoncvs1.FreeBSD.org:/home/ncvs co src</userinput>
The authenticity of host 'anoncvs1.freebsd.org (216.87.78.137)' can't be established.
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
index 44cccea951..46894acfe0 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
@@ -1183,7 +1183,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/ fetch</userinput></screen>
</sect3>
<sect3 id="portupgrade">
- <title>Upgrading Ports using Portupgrade</title>
+ <title>Upgrading Ports Using Portupgrade</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>portupgrade</primary>
@@ -1237,7 +1237,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/ fetch</userinput></screen>
</sect3>
<sect3 id="portmanager">
- <title>Upgrading Ports using Portmanager</title>
+ <title>Upgrading Ports Using Portmanager</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>portmanager</primary>
@@ -1277,7 +1277,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/ fetch</userinput></screen>
</sect3>
<sect3 id="portmaster">
- <title>Upgrading Ports using Portmaster</title>
+ <title>Upgrading Ports Using Portmaster</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>portmaster</primary>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
index dc54744d5e..469afb0264 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@
<sect2>
<title>Securing the Kernel Core, Raw Devices, and
- File systems</title>
+ File Systems</title>
<para>If an attacker breaks <username>root</username> he can do
just about anything, but there are certain conveniences. For
@@ -1879,8 +1879,8 @@ Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG</screen>
</sect2>
<sect2>
- <title><application>Kerberos</application> enabling a server
- with Heimdal services</title>
+ <title><application>Kerberos</application> Enabling a Server
+ with Heimdal Services</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>Kerberos5</primary>
@@ -1989,7 +1989,7 @@ kadmin><userinput> exit</userinput></screen>
</sect2>
<sect2>
- <title><application>Kerberos</application> enabling a client
+ <title><application>Kerberos</application> Enabling a Client
with Heimdal</title>
<indexterm>
@@ -2040,7 +2040,7 @@ kadmin><userinput> exit</userinput></screen>
</sect2>
<sect2>
- <title>User configuration files: <filename>.k5login</filename>
+ <title>User Configuration Files: <filename>.k5login</filename>
and <filename>.k5users</filename></title>
<indexterm>
@@ -2237,7 +2237,7 @@ jdoe@example.org</screen>
<sect2>
<title>Differences with the <acronym>MIT</acronym>
- port</title>
+ Port</title>
<para>The major difference between the <acronym>MIT</acronym>
and Heimdal installs relates to the
@@ -2292,7 +2292,7 @@ kadmind5_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2>
- <title>Mitigating limitations found in
+ <title>Mitigating Limitations Found in
<application>Kerberos</application></title>
<indexterm>
@@ -2316,8 +2316,8 @@ kadmind5_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
</sect3>
<sect3>
- <title><application>Kerberos</application> is intended for
- single-user workstations</title>
+ <title><application>Kerberos</application> is Intended for
+ Single-User Workstations</title>
<para>In a multi-user environment,
<application>Kerberos</application> is less secure.
@@ -2337,7 +2337,7 @@ kadmind5_server_enable="YES"</programlisting>
</sect3>
<sect3>
- <title>The KDC is a single point of failure</title>
+ <title>The KDC is a Single Point of Failure</title>
<para>By design, the <acronym>KDC</acronym> must be as
secure as the master password database is contained on it.
@@ -3185,7 +3185,7 @@ racoon_enable="yes"</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2>
- <title>Enabling sshd</title>
+ <title>Enabling <application>sshd</application></title>
<indexterm>
<primary>OpenSSH</primary>
@@ -3307,7 +3307,7 @@ COPYRIGHT 100% |*****************************| 4735
</sect2>
<sect2 id="security-ssh-keygen">
- <title>ssh-keygen</title>
+ <title><application>ssh-keygen</application></title>
<para>Instead of using passwords, &man.ssh-keygen.1; can
be used to generate DSA or RSA keys to authenticate a
@@ -3356,7 +3356,7 @@ bb:48:db:f2:93:57:80:b6:aa:bc:f5:d5:ba:8f:79:17 user@host.example.com</screen>
</sect2>
<sect2 id="security-ssh-agent">
- <title>ssh-agent and ssh-add</title>
+ <title><application>ssh-agent</application> and <application>ssh-add</application></title>
<para>The &man.ssh-agent.1; and &man.ssh-add.1; utilities
provide methods for <application>SSH</application> keys to
@@ -3887,7 +3887,7 @@ You are advised to update or deinstall the affected package(s) immediately.</pro
to patch a system.</para>
<sect2>
- <title>What does an advisory look like?</title>
+ <title>What Does an Advisory Look Like?</title>
<para>The &os; security advisories look similar to the one
below, taken from the &a.security-notifications.name;
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml
index 6451a4b97d..7bfa0e699a 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml
@@ -810,7 +810,7 @@ sio3: type 16550A</screen>
through the Ports Collection. The Ports include quite a few
utilities which can work in ways similar to &man.cu.1; and
&man.tip.1;,
- i.e. <filename role="package">comms/minicom</filename>.</para>
+ i.e., <filename role="package">comms/minicom</filename>.</para>
</note>
</sect3>
@@ -1173,7 +1173,7 @@ ttyu5 "/usr/libexec/getty std.19200" vt100 on insecure
modems instead of terminals.</para>
<sect2>
- <title>External vs. Internal Modems</title>
+ <title>External Versus Internal Modems</title>
<para>External modems seem to be more convenient for dial-up, because
external modems often can be semi-permanently configured via
@@ -1881,7 +1881,7 @@ AT&amp;B2&amp;W</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2 id="direct-at">
- <title>How Am I Expected to Enter These AT Commands?</title>
+ <title>How Am I Expected to Enter These <literal>AT</literal> Commands?</title>
<indexterm>
<primary><filename>/etc/remote</filename></primary>
@@ -1895,7 +1895,7 @@ AT&amp;B2&amp;W</programlisting>
<para>Use the highest bps rate your modem supports in the br capability.
Then, type <command>tip cuau0</command> and you will be connected to
- your modem.</para>
+ your modem.</para >
<para>Or use <command>cu</command> as <username>root</username> with the
following command:</para>
@@ -1903,9 +1903,9 @@ AT&amp;B2&amp;W</programlisting>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cu -l<replaceable>line</replaceable> -s<replaceable>speed</replaceable></userinput></screen>
<para><replaceable>line</replaceable> is the serial port
- (e.g.<filename>/dev/cuau0</filename>) and
+ (e.g., <filename>/dev/cuau0</filename>) and
<replaceable>speed</replaceable> is the speed
- (e.g.<literal>57600</literal>). When you are done entering the AT
+ (e.g., <literal>57600</literal>). When you are done entering the AT
commands type <command>~.</command> to exit.</para>
</sect2>
@@ -2117,7 +2117,7 @@ raisechar=^^</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2 id="zmodem-tip">
- <title>How Can I Run zmodem with <command>tip</command>?</title>
+ <title>How Can I Run <application>zmodem</application> with <command>tip</command>?</title>
<para>To receive files, start the sending program on the remote end.
Then, type <command>~C rz</command> to begin receiving them
@@ -2829,7 +2829,7 @@ ttyu3 "/usr/libexec/getty std.9600" unknown off secure</programlisting>
Change <literal>off</literal> to <literal>on</literal> for the
desired port. If you have changed the speed of the serial port,
you need to change <literal>std.9600</literal> to match the current
- setting, e.g. <literal>std.19200</literal>.</para>
+ setting, e.g., <literal>std.19200</literal>.</para>
<para>You may also want to change the terminal type from
<literal>unknown</literal> to the actual type of your serial
@@ -2907,7 +2907,7 @@ ttyu3 "/usr/libexec/getty std.9600" unknown off secure</programlisting>
while most systems will let you boot without a keyboard, there
are quite a few that will not let you boot without a graphics adapter.
Machines with AMI BIOSes can be configured to boot with no graphics
- adapter installed simply by changing the
+ adapter installed by changing the
<quote>graphics adapter</quote> setting in the CMOS configuration to
<quote>Not installed.</quote></para>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml
index 8f616a7c9d..72a780dcdb 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@
the new user a welcome message.</para>
<example>
- <title>Adding a user on &os;</title>
+ <title>Adding a User on &os;</title>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>adduser</userinput>
Username: <userinput>jru</userinput>
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml
index 8ea9cfb14b..f699c32d85 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.sgml
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@
<procedure>
<step>
- <title>Set boot loader variables</title>
+ <title>Set Boot Loader Variables</title>
<para>The most important step is to reduce the
<option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
</step>
<step>
- <title>Create a new kernel configuration file</title>
+ <title>Create a New Kernel Configuration File</title>
<para>You can remove all of the SCSI, FireWire, and USB
device drivers. <application>Parallels</application>
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@
</step>
<step>
- <title>Setup networking</title>
+ <title>Setup Networking</title>
<para>The most basic networking setup involves simply
using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
<procedure>
<step>
- <title>Set boot loader variables</title>
+ <title>Set Boot Loader Variables</title>
<para>The most important step is to reduce the
<option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization
@@ -749,7 +749,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
</step>
<step>
- <title>Create a new kernel configuration file</title>
+ <title>Create a New Kernel Configuration File</title>
<para>You can remove all of the SCSI, FireWire, and USB
device drivers. <application>Virtual PC</application>
@@ -761,7 +761,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
</step>
<step>
- <title>Setup networking</title>
+ <title>Setup Networking</title>
<para>The most basic networking setup involves simply
using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same
@@ -926,7 +926,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
<procedure>
<step>
- <title>Set boot loader variables</title>
+ <title>Set Boot Loader Variables</title>
<para>The most important step is to reduce the
<option>kern.hz</option> tunable to reduce the CPU utilization
@@ -944,7 +944,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
</step>
<step>
- <title>Create a new kernel configuration file</title>
+ <title>Create a New Kernel Configuration file</title>
<para>You can remove all of the FireWire, and USB device
drivers. <application>VMware</application> provides a
@@ -954,7 +954,7 @@ xenbr1 8000.feffffffffff no vif0.1
</step>
<step>
- <title>Setup networking</title>
+ <title>Setup Networking</title>
<para>The most basic networking setup involves simply
using DHCP to connect your virtual machine to the same
@@ -1051,7 +1051,7 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
&lt;!--
# Sun VirtualBox
# Hal driver description for the vboxmouse driver
-# $Id: chapter.sgml,v 1.27 2011-12-08 19:14:30 manolis Exp $
+# $Id: chapter.sgml,v 1.28 2012-02-15 18:14:17 eadler Exp $
Copyright (C) 2008-2009 Sun Microsystems, Inc.
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml
index 047437a196..08d4c89295 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
<quote>X server</quote> runs on the computer that has the keyboard,
monitor, and mouse attached. The server's responsibility includes tasks such as managing
the display, handling input from the keyboard and mouse, and other
- input or output devices (i.e. a <quote>tablet</quote> can be used as
+ input or output devices (i.e., a <quote>tablet</quote> can be used as
an input device, and a video projector may be an alternative output
device).
Each X application (such as <application>XTerm</application>, or
@@ -530,7 +530,7 @@ dbus_enable="YES"</programlisting>
<programlisting>Option "AutoAddDevices" "false"</programlisting>
<para>Input devices may then be configured as in previous versions,
- along with any other options needed (e.g. keyboard layout
+ along with any other options needed (e.g., keyboard layout
switching).</para>
<note>